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[TheDudeManJohn]

sure you can see it..................................when its done............give me a few more months.............i got a block on this book....i cant decide if i want the character you have been fallowing all this time to suddenly die.....and just like that everything he worked for is stolen from him..............................or for him to succeed like every other fuckin book in the world..........(and yes i could continue after he dies hell could do a sequel weather he lives or dies....based on the secondary characters....)

[JKL;!!!!!]

yeah the suddenly die is a great plot twist, and also you can make a character that plays a minor role (lets say a waiter at a restaurant) become the main character!

[TheDudeManJohn]

i got some one in mind.....his co worker thats a complete ass hole to him all the time.........................................give him a deep background like he hates the guy because he knows he will never be as liked or loved by so many as john is.........(yes im the main character lol it may change at the end) so and hell maybe hes the one that kills him............fuck idk..........maybe he steals johns girlfriend or..........................idk see BLOCK

[JKL;!!!!!]

waht's block?
and good storyline and (yes your name is john)