Story time! ....?

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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by dewero » Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:35 pm

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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by hobobuster » Sun Dec 11, 2011 11:56 pm

Okay so, the formatting on forums like this aren't very appealing to the eye for story writing, so I used a seprerate site.

I will have it linked in this post, for easy access, and will keep it in my sig for yall to have easy access. And I'll let you know when it has been updated with a new chapter. Keep in mind you'll have to click on the Prologue button/link from this page (this page is just the book description, author info, etc), and continue from there. There will be a button at the bottom of each chapter to move onto the next chapter.

Anyways, comment there or ere, and let me know what you think. THANKS!

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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by THEBOMB12321 » Mon Dec 12, 2011 12:23 am

Will do!
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by dewero » Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:02 am

Yay!
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by hobobuster » Mon Dec 12, 2011 4:48 am

Thank you bomb for your comment on there, I greatly appreciate it!
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Mon Dec 12, 2011 11:21 am

wow, this looks interesting. i like to read longer stuff in print though, besides, i spent all yesterday reading stuff on the screen so i'll print the first chapter and read it later. Probably with the next chapter or something, depends on when are you going to continue :P The prologue is really good. I mean really.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:47 pm

Doublepost of Bump,

should i move this to Art?
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by Anonymously Famous » Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:51 pm

It would probably fit in art. Then again, so would the weather photography thread.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:55 pm

yeah but this is actually a discussion of Hobo's story, and i think it should stay that way.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by Anonymously Famous » Wed Dec 14, 2011 7:53 pm

Sounds good.

By the way, hobo, I'll get to reading what you have up there so far sometime this weekend.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by hobobuster » Thu Dec 15, 2011 7:28 am

Thanks guys for taking the time to read it, and I just uploaded the second chapter, so check it out!

As far as moving it goes, it's fine with me however you want to do it, I started it here because I wanted people to see it, not many frequent the Art section, but if it needs to be done, its not a problem! Lemme know :D
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Thu Dec 15, 2011 3:41 pm

it's already in Art, but there is a shadow topic in General still. (that redirects here)
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by Dreams » Thu Dec 15, 2011 6:59 pm

Ninja topic?
And wow! That story is actually really really really really really good! I fail super hard at writing, so you are super super good :)

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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by hobobuster » Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:01 am

Ninja topics are THE most dangerous of all topics. And thanks for the comments, i appreciate it. Also thanks to you all whom have signed up there to leave ratings and reviews!
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Sat Dec 17, 2011 12:45 pm

anytime :) tell us when the next chapter is up!
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by hobobuster » Sat Dec 17, 2011 10:02 pm

Will do. May be a bit. Still having a bit of writer's block, but I have an outline. So maybe a day of rest or two can help.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Sun Dec 18, 2011 8:29 pm

"I can't wait to read this book!"
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by Anonymously Famous » Mon Dec 19, 2011 7:05 pm

So I wasn't able to get any reading done over the weekend... Computer issues that are still being resolved. But I will read and give feedback. Eventually.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by Dreams » Wed Jan 04, 2012 1:50 am

on no... that sucks. I hate computer issues. WELL, after a long and relaxing winter break, I'M BACK!

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