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BenBen gets up, and seeing the comotion, he decides that this would be a good time to test his improvised rocket launcher in combat. He stuffed it full of tennis balls, aimed away from Gamma, and fired. Tennis balls everywhere! They ended up being propelled with enough force to rip through a zombie's head. Pleased at the result, he began shooting zombies with his pistols.

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bunchie has successfully located some baggy pants and a trench coat so being more heavy duty than his last cloths he changes into them.

meanwhile his family are scavenging through the remains of the hounds bunchie then steps out side and the lesser kin rush over to him and bunchie begins to make noises that can be roughly translated into "fellow zombies today we begin our journey to find more resources and more members for our family those of you who wish to join me follow me those who don't will protect this colony from invading zombie forces and any living that venture in and while on the topic of the living if you do find any bite them but don't eat them for they will join our ranks and we will be stronger for it is that understood" grunted bunchie before 15 zombies stepped up to join him while the rest were left agreeing with the last statement "we are off take care of the resources and make more of us and soon we will run this place and there will be food, water and safety for all" grunted bunchie as he left with his 15 zombie henchmen.

soon afterward the group had ended up at a Mall inhabited by a rival clan and at least 2 survivors one male one female making there way through "Brothers we will wait in the shadows until the living ones grow tired then we will join them to our ranks and kill off the last remnants of the clan that dwells here" grunted bunchie as the group took positions that bunchie marked out for an ambush "they aren't as smart as I but they can follow orders well enough" thought bunchie as he took his position in a book store that was near the survivors.

(back story on survivors)
"damn how many of them are there" said the male survivor "not much more I reckon" said the female one. the two of them are twins their names are Novak and Risa they were celebrating their 16th birthday when the message came on the TV and radio. They have silvery hair and violet eyes they enjoy teasing or confusing people but they are still very nice and are loyal to their friends. Novak likes stars and planets while Risa likes perfume and sweets they have found themselves in this situation because they wanted to fortify the Mall so that they had protection and a ready supply of food but underestimated the zombies already there.

(back to bunchie)
The survivors looked exhausted and their guns were almost out of bullets but they had eliminated at least 80% of the zombies in the Mall and his zombies had taken out the rest silently. The survivors stopped at the fountain in the middle of the mall to get a drink seeing as it was the closest and by far safer way of getting water unless you wanted to fight zombies in a cramped space like a rest room they started to drink the water from the fountain and bunchie signaled his zombies to disarm the survivors who had dropped their weapons in order to cup the water into their mouths a zombie rushed in and threw the guns away as bunchie made his silent approach the female survivor had completely let her gaurd down so bunchie targeted her first placing a hand over her mouth before biting her shoulder he then signaled the other zombies to keep her quiet while he approached the male survivor that still hadn't noticed a thing bunchie was just about to bite the male survivor before the female one managed a scream which alerted him the male survivor turned suddenly and knocked bunchie to the ground before getting up and looking for his gun which had been stolen by the zombies before hand bunchie got up and rushed at the male survivor who tried to punch but bunhie had ducked and flipped the survivor onto his back allowing the other zombies to restrain him as bunchie bit the survivor on the shoulder infecting him.

soon after the 2 survivors were beginning to mutate into special zombies leaving the 15 zombies to secure the location while bunchie guarded the new recruits suddenly a roar was heard and 3 large zombies came into view bunchie had killed one before but 3 at once was suicidal but he had to do something the first one charged him and bunchie jumped and laded on the side of a wall which he dug his claws into when suddenly one of the other 2 large zombies leaped and punched bunchie into the wall bunchie fell and the third large zombie smashed him into the ground bunchie got up and began running with one of the large ones chasing him bunchie then did a backwards flip and landed on top of the large zombie where he then proceeded to behead it bunchie jumped off the first large zombie but found that the other two had gotten close and were blocking his escape bunchie thought that he was going to be killed before something flew through the air and severed one of the large zombies from its waist bunchie tuned to see the last large zombie be beheaded by the male survivor who was now a zombie bunchie turned and saw that the female survivor was the one that had severed the other large zombie in two.

The now zombified survivors approached bunchie before the female one said "where are we and why do we feel like we need to help you" bunchie replied "You are in a mall you are zombies that have been made by me therefor you are loyal to me my name is bunchie and I'm taking places over so that my family that now includes you may live in peace but may I ask what are your names" the male one responded with "My names Novak and don't tell me what to do I already know so please just kindly shut up" and then the female one said while shouldering Novak in the ribs "my name is Risa and please forgive my sibling for insulting you he has anger management problems" bunchie looked at the new recruits Novak looked agile and fast and had some weird purplish spines coming from the top of his wrist and back but he had smaller claws than most zombies and didn't look particularly strong bunchie then turned to Risa who was a fast zombie but she didn't have any claws but she did have a bladed arm and seemed to be producing a lot of heat from her hands which bunchie noted as strange "I see that you are both more intelligent than my other family members and that you seem to be new kinds of special zombies so I think that it is suitable for you to be my advisers and the next in the chain of command after me" said bunchie as he walked off to see if the mall had been secured.

Use. Shorter. Sentences. It is painful to read massive sentences with hardly any punctuation. Please keep that in mind. Imagine you are giving a speech. You will die if you read that as it is, so use more punctuation!
BJ carries his rifle up to the roof of the warehouse. He looks through the scope and fires at a group of zombies, the force of the shot shaking him. The bullet enters one zombies head, and exits through another one that had at least three more between them. "Sweet!" BJ yelled in excitement, after being slid back by a gunshot. "This is awesome!" BJ continued firing on zombies.

I agree. Zombies are dead, technically reanimated, so they do not funciton properly. They move without need of internal organs, the brain has only been revived enough to control slow movements and make funny grunts and groans. If they were Infected, that would be a different story...
BJ goes to reload his gun, before realising he only brought up one magazine. He stops himself facepalming before heading inside, putting the gun down, and taking his MG outside to blast mroe zombies.

bunchie spy wrote:so that means by what you are saying that I may as well quit the rp because my character is mindless and can't do any of the things that I say.

that's just mean.

No, we were just pointing out the guidelines. You were the one who decided to get bitten. You should have read through the posts before getting bitten... But I agree with Gamma, you can be a special zombie. A very thpethal zombie... Jokes aside though, I see no harm in you being different except maybe character death
BJ heads inside after clearing the street of zombis. He finds the others. "Alright, we need to locate Bunchie, and see if he is alright. He was acting differently to the other zombies, he just ran when he was infected rather than fighting us. We can safely assume he has some kind of resistance, but may still have the zombie's instincts, so he probably ran to prevent internal conflict of saving his friends or being just like the other zombies. We may be able to find a cure using Bunchie, if he is only half zombie. He may have the cure within him. So who wants to go on this mission?" BJ asked after his speech.

what about the zombies that I make should they be special seeing as they probably have the same strain of zombie virus or should they be brainless? the zombie debate confuses me

They are dead. Dead and incapable of proper thought. Think back to anything zombie related you have ever seen. They are slow, stupid, and you only get stronger ones in games just so the game isn't a pushover. Their brains can only perform slow and simple tasks. Do NOT kill the traditional zombie!

I have seen some pretty intelligent zombies in movies and games and is Frankenstein monster count as a zombie because it was made using bits of dead people and it ended up intelligent enough to know right, wrong, good, evil and such stuff even communicate as a intellectual individual