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Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:00 am
by DomTar275
The sun sets
I feel nothing
The rain falls
I begin to see something
Your hand is in mine
I feel the ache
You're not coming back

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:04 am
by keja
But I'm still not leaving for a long time. :)

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:17 pm
by DomTar275
lol thats nice to know.

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:09 pm
by ForrestKeys
Who is leaving?

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 7:10 pm
by Ml08180
You are

*pushes forrest out door*

hey where's the key, I can't lock it without the key

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 11:56 pm
by keja
Bullies get no respect from ASDF.

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:00 am
by ForrestKeys
So do mafias and gangsters,

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:08 pm
by DomTar275
A stranger walks in
She asks for his name.
He tells her, and he begins
To let her see the shame.
She begins to feel more tame,
Her heart beats whenever you speak
the vowels of her name.
When she walks, the floor does not creak.
He looks in her eyes, she feels weak.
The blood in her veins dances for him.
She, so innocent, so meek
Would do anything for his every whim.
He took her by the hand, and made her see
She was the most beautiful thing, under the blossom tree.

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:59 pm
by keja
That's going to take a lot to follow...

And If I go by the poems and short stories alongside mine in an actual book, it's more than good enough to be published.

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 10:37 pm
by DomTar275
whats going to take a lot to follow

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 11:08 pm
by Shai'tan
DomTar275 wrote:A stranger walks in
She asks for his name.
He tells her, and he begins
To let her see the shame.
She begins to feel more tame,
Her heart beats whenever you speak
the vowels of her name.
When she walks, the floor does not creak.
He looks in her eyes, she feels weak.
The blood in her veins dances for him.
She, so innocent, so meek
Would do anything for his every whim.
He took her by the hand, and made her see
She was the most beautiful thing, under the blossom tree.
^ This

It's so good it'll be pretty hard to top it...

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:48 pm
by keja
Yes, that.

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:39 pm
by Ml08180
There once was a man who was quite crude and crass,
he slipped on the ice and fell on his ass.

(thanks to Jose for the inspiration. And for falling on his ass.)

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:48 pm
by keja
It's not finished.

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:49 pm
by Ml08180
I am

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:04 pm
by keja
Short one here, but I like it.

Christmas Day, 1999
Gameboy Color

Christmas Day, 2009
Aftershave

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:46 am
by Ml08180
I like gameboys, therefore, I like that

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 4:23 am
by lil timmy
keja wrote:Short one here, but I like it.

Christmas Day, 1999
Gameboy Color

Christmas Day, 2009
Aftershave
I had a huge ass mustache when I was 14

I looked like Luigi

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 4:11 am
by DomTar275
When we were eight, we loved to play outside.
We ran though streets, lawns and played at the park.
Without a care and nothing more to hide,
we were together through the light and dark.
Twelve years into life, the smile and spark
faded and you fell away from the truth.
Your eyes had shown hope, now they show a mark.
Line up, one and all, to the ticket booth
you will see how it feels to lose a tooth.
Tooth meaning friend, and a friend meaning love.
One love in whom I had in all my youth.
Not a romance, but one I was proud of.
You were the best, my one beloved friend.
Now you have gone, I smile at the end.

Re: Word art sort of

Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 11:05 am
by keja
You are Beauty
Not just a face
You are Genius
the pride of our race

You are Divine
from heavens above
You are God's greates Angel
And the one that I love

But I cannot see why you ignore my call
Tell me mirror, on the wall