Story time! ....?

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Story time! ....?

Post by hobobuster » Fri Dec 09, 2011 2:37 am

So, I am in the process of writing a book. I am trying to get it copywrited soon enough, but I was curious.

If I began posting it up here, in installments, would anyone be interested in reading it? And be truely critical? It's a pretty good book I think, I just want to make sure I'm doing a good job of getting the right "stuff" in there, and perhaps some feedback on what else could be added to it can be helpful as well.

Who knows, perhaps an honorary mention is up for incentive for all my ASDF-ers ;)

So please answer the poll with yes or no, would you read it and be honest/on topic?
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by dewero » Fri Dec 09, 2011 2:47 am

Yes :)
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Post by hobobuster » Fri Dec 09, 2011 3:29 am

Awesome! Be sure to vote^^^
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Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:25 am

please do. (but use the art section.)
i'm curious.
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Post by Anonymously Famous » Fri Dec 09, 2011 2:34 pm

I wouldn't mind reading it.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by AmazinglyASDF » Fri Dec 09, 2011 3:51 pm

I'm writing a short one for no real reason
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Post by hobobuster » Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:21 pm

Right on. It will make me feel really good to have my words getting out there, the support really helps :D I will post the Porlogue and first chapter today. So far it is untitled.

Also, I am wondering if I should just link to this page to let people comment, so as not to clutter it up, or just let people comment there. What do you think?

And, also, the genre is a really easy one, since its my first novel i decided to go the easy route lol. :mrgreen:
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Post by Dreams » Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:30 pm

I would be honest, and I would like to read a story. I like stories. Maybe we can tell stories over YouStream or soemthing? Or tweet your story 255 words at a time over twitter...

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Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:36 pm

or just use the ASDForums ™ .. :)
hobobuster wrote:Also, I am wondering if I should just link to this page to let people comment, so as not to clutter it up, or just let people comment there. What do you think?
if you don't want it cluttered by other posts, it would need to be a locked thread..
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Post by Dreams » Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:40 pm

I'm gonna make a twitter account and start telling stories there a sentence at a time. Can I link?

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Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:40 pm

of course. that does seem like a fun idea.
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Post by Dreams » Fri Dec 09, 2011 6:41 pm

Ooh gonna make the twitter right now...

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Post by hobobuster » Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:56 pm

If only was an active member of the Twitter guild.

And okay ATOM! if it is locked though, how will i be able to post in it to keep it updated?
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Post by Anonymously Famous » Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:01 pm

I have a Twitter account!

I've composed a grand total of... 1 Tweet.
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Post by THEBOMB12321 » Sat Dec 10, 2011 12:26 am

of course
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by assdef » Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:43 am

Story time:

Once upon a time there was a little girl that would pick her nose and eat her boogers. As a result, she died. You may think it's funny but it snot.

The end.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by AmazinglyASDF » Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:57 am

Ahahah
ahha
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I'm so happy
you made me HOLY SHIT ITS A TIGER WITH A HISTORY BOOK INBETWEEN ITS TOES
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Wait I don't believe in god
SCIENCE HELP US
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Post by atomtengeralattjaro » Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:20 am

Anonymously Famous wrote:I have a Twitter account!

I've composed a grand total of... 1 Tweet.
i hope it's worth as much as 10000 other tweets.
hobobuster wrote:And okay ATOM! if it is locked though, how will i be able to post in it to keep it updated?
impossibru.
just make an thread in art, or lores and tales, and go for it. maybe tell people in the first post not to spam in it and link to this thread or something.
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Re: Story time! ....?

Post by dewero » Sun Dec 11, 2011 1:06 am

assdef wrote:Story time:

Once upon a time there was a little girl that would pick her nose and eat her boogers. As a result, she died. You may think it's funny but it snot.

The end.
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Post by THEBOMB12321 » Sun Dec 11, 2011 9:53 pm

assdef wrote:Story time:

Once upon a time there was a little girl that would pick her nose and eat her boogers. As a result, she died. You may think it's funny but it snot.

The end.
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