So... now Ima 'musician'
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In soundcloud you can annotate the songs at specific times, so if there is one or something in particular that you liked you can leave a note there 
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Re: So... now Ima 'musician'
(note: this is a rewrite of a previous review, so it may leave out some stuff i forgot to put in, and feel less detailed, because i had at least 2000 words of information on your first two albums, but i accidentaly cntrl+w'd and im pissed af that i lost it. i promise to get you some review!)
legacy album
-loser: this was my favorite from legacy. feels very dramatic, and i'd play this in a moment like that in a tv show/movie. I had more to say about this last time, but just know it's my strong favorite!
-past lives - the name makes me think it would be a lot more like loser in theme. this is very rock-androlly, which i am not a fan of personally, to me, unless musicians take huge moves to make sure the bass sticks, lots of songs end up very much like a mesh of constant bass. your song does not feel like this, from what i heard it was quite well established and well composed. i cant give you the full appreciation you deserve on this one though.
-hyphen - this one feels super game-tracky, i'd see this in a platformer or puzzler or action game. imo this would be perfect for a geometry dash level (probably one in the middle difficulties). my second favorite of this album
thoughts of a machine album
-gem - this was exactly what the name implied. a nice little gem, to me it doesnt have the right style or length to fit into a full gametrack or even a between-levels title screen. i do like it though and from this i begin to feel like this is a very gametracky album.
-christmas (dude's tribute) - is this for thingerdudes? lul. it doesnt feel christmasy at all, but it is a very nice song with an interesting and new tempo. I'm a fan, also the notes are spot on for what your trying to accomplish. I like how the song changes a few times, and it's all well and good, but not festival holiday thematic lol sorry.
-prelude i - i recognize this is part of a three-parter with climax and conclusion. I like this one, but it's probs not one of my favs, i dont remember what i had to say about it last time
-ii climax - this isn't super climaxy imo, it does feel like an intro to a boss battle for a while and the constant pauses do add drama, but it feels a bit too quiet to be part of a climax, especially since all these other songs are so much more well-defined. this is more intense i guess, and i do like it, but it seems a little lackluster. (that is what i though first time, this time i could see this as a climax)
-iii conclusion - last time i thought this could switch places with climax, this being that, and climax being the conclusion if it meant that. thinking about it now, either could be a climax imo
-burn ii (where is burn 1 lele) - i can kind of feel the name in this, but only a little. otherwise it is very similar in style to the other ones, and i think having 6 in the list is just enough to make a small game of. this one feels a bit un-unique and may have been good in place of prelude? maybe i've listened to a bit much music tho. If you were to want to make a longer game, than you could remix these songs a few times each and get a fair 30-40 levels
unreleased tracks for unreleased games (is this foreshadowing, or something else?)
-level 1a - seems very beginning-to-a-levelish , im a large fan. this does feel like a game with at least some comedy ,not too serious but also good music.
-level 1b - i could see this playing right after 1a, or after a mid-level fragment fight or puzzle
-level 2 - a nice difference from level 1, and doesnt get too extreem to fast.
-loop 1 - very loopable, might be hard to pull it off with no differentation, but it's nice.
-loop 2 - even more loopable than 1 imho!
all-in-all i am surprised by your talent, most people who make stuff don't actually make good stuff that i enjoy not just relatively but generally! This is very good and you have talent! (my favorite is loser, i like some of the loops, and gem is nice too!)
froggo out
legacy album
-loser: this was my favorite from legacy. feels very dramatic, and i'd play this in a moment like that in a tv show/movie. I had more to say about this last time, but just know it's my strong favorite!
-past lives - the name makes me think it would be a lot more like loser in theme. this is very rock-androlly, which i am not a fan of personally, to me, unless musicians take huge moves to make sure the bass sticks, lots of songs end up very much like a mesh of constant bass. your song does not feel like this, from what i heard it was quite well established and well composed. i cant give you the full appreciation you deserve on this one though.
-hyphen - this one feels super game-tracky, i'd see this in a platformer or puzzler or action game. imo this would be perfect for a geometry dash level (probably one in the middle difficulties). my second favorite of this album
thoughts of a machine album
-gem - this was exactly what the name implied. a nice little gem, to me it doesnt have the right style or length to fit into a full gametrack or even a between-levels title screen. i do like it though and from this i begin to feel like this is a very gametracky album.
-christmas (dude's tribute) - is this for thingerdudes? lul. it doesnt feel christmasy at all, but it is a very nice song with an interesting and new tempo. I'm a fan, also the notes are spot on for what your trying to accomplish. I like how the song changes a few times, and it's all well and good, but not festival holiday thematic lol sorry.
-prelude i - i recognize this is part of a three-parter with climax and conclusion. I like this one, but it's probs not one of my favs, i dont remember what i had to say about it last time
-ii climax - this isn't super climaxy imo, it does feel like an intro to a boss battle for a while and the constant pauses do add drama, but it feels a bit too quiet to be part of a climax, especially since all these other songs are so much more well-defined. this is more intense i guess, and i do like it, but it seems a little lackluster. (that is what i though first time, this time i could see this as a climax)
-iii conclusion - last time i thought this could switch places with climax, this being that, and climax being the conclusion if it meant that. thinking about it now, either could be a climax imo
-burn ii (where is burn 1 lele) - i can kind of feel the name in this, but only a little. otherwise it is very similar in style to the other ones, and i think having 6 in the list is just enough to make a small game of. this one feels a bit un-unique and may have been good in place of prelude? maybe i've listened to a bit much music tho. If you were to want to make a longer game, than you could remix these songs a few times each and get a fair 30-40 levels
unreleased tracks for unreleased games (is this foreshadowing, or something else?)
-level 1a - seems very beginning-to-a-levelish , im a large fan. this does feel like a game with at least some comedy ,not too serious but also good music.
-level 1b - i could see this playing right after 1a, or after a mid-level fragment fight or puzzle
-level 2 - a nice difference from level 1, and doesnt get too extreem to fast.
-loop 1 - very loopable, might be hard to pull it off with no differentation, but it's nice.
-loop 2 - even more loopable than 1 imho!
all-in-all i am surprised by your talent, most people who make stuff don't actually make good stuff that i enjoy not just relatively but generally! This is very good and you have talent! (my favorite is loser, i like some of the loops, and gem is nice too!)
froggo out
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