This is where we can discuss my story, FLIGHT. Comments are welcome. If you find any grammatical errors in the story just let me know; also if you're confused about something in the story you can tell me.
I'm planning on making FLIGHT into a novel. I encourage you to read it but it's fine if you don't like it. You'll help me make it a good read for many different audiences.
Regards, asdfkumquat
FLIGHT - feedback [serious]
FLIGHT - feedback [serious]
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Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]
Do you want this topic to be moved to Lores and Tales (like Shai's This World ~ Feedback)?
Or should just this discussion thread be linked into the first post of Flight?
Or should just this discussion thread be linked into the first post of Flight?
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done. I'd suggest you to link the story to this thread too, like "This is where we can discuss my story, Flight", or "read it here", or something like that.
I know, I know, i should stop bitching and start reading
I know, I know, i should stop bitching and start reading
Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]
I shall read, but not right now. We have to go some place to get some thing in a few minutes. I'm pretty sure it's costco for groceries...
Re: FLIGHT - feedback [serious]
I love Flight :DDD
assdef wrote:I've seen a number of Cocks in my days.
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Omg you got Chapter 2 up. 
Did you still want that critique I said I would do?
Did you still want that critique I said I would do?~I disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it.
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Of course!
News: I'm working on Chapter 3 now and I have a good start
News: I'm working on Chapter 3 now and I have a good start
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Myeh, well I got plenty of time now, so I should do it now... But Heroes of Might and Magic is too fun... >.<
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It is sorta >.<
It's like a strategy thing, but it's really fun.
It's like a strategy thing, but it's really fun.
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Sounds fun. If I can force myself to stop playin Heroes, then I'll do your thingy... >.<
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*sighs*
All right...
All right...
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Trying to write it now... >.<
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